Nice... I want to see them together. Can wait for the next chapter
Btw... author, I have a friendly advice for you and that is : - the content and conflict. I know that this comic has a LOT of conflicts... but each conflict is too short, but... it does give people a higher satisfaction each problem solved. But... I can pretty much get bored in the way you craft the story (I don't know why😅😅). I would if the story is like a comic called "The Epic Revenge". because the story have one main quest which only finished at the end of the story, and only have 1 side quest each side quest is completed
●Btw, (not part of the advice) I like the way you use the unthinkable essence on this chat story😊😊
(Remember, just a friendly advice... I'm not here to push you😊😊😊
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𝐍𝐨𝐨𝐧𝐚 𝐉𝐮𝐧𝐠𝐤𝐨𝐨𝐤
update please
2021-01-11
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𝐍𝐨𝐨𝐧𝐚 𝐉𝐮𝐧𝐠𝐤𝐨𝐨𝐤
update!!!
2021-01-09
1
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Nice... I want to see them together. Can wait for the next chapter
Btw... author, I have a friendly advice for you and that is :
- the content and conflict. I know that this comic has a LOT of conflicts... but each conflict is too short, but... it does give people a higher satisfaction each problem solved. But... I can pretty much get bored in the way you craft the story (I don't know why😅😅). I would if the story is like a comic called "The Epic Revenge". because the story have one main quest which only finished at the end of the story, and only have 1 side quest each side quest is completed
●Btw, (not part of the advice) I like the way you use the unthinkable essence on this chat story😊😊
(Remember, just a friendly advice... I'm not here to push you😊😊😊
2020-09-24
2