author sorry to say this ....author your story content is nice.... but the way you are delivering is not good...i mean they way you are writing is two fast forward and i didn't understand why some character are comes and suddenly disappearing and i also don't understand why tae doing and kook doing like that... author you have to write the story with full of dedication and understandable to people who read..why i am saying this is ..your story content is nice but i am liking your writing hope you understand and change it .. if you don't like it then don't mind me....
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2023-05-02
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author sorry to say this ....author your story content is nice.... but the way you are delivering is not good...i mean they way you are writing is two fast forward and i didn't understand why some character are comes and suddenly disappearing and i also don't understand why tae doing and kook doing like that... author you have to write the story with full of dedication and understandable to people who read..why i am saying this is ..your story content is nice but i am liking your writing hope you understand and change it .. if you don't like it then don't mind me....
2023-05-02
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