I understand the need to explain the world and magic (max 2 pages) and the into (approx 2 pages) some notes from author this should take about 7 pages. 16 not many people will stick with this story no matter how great it looks for this long... I suggest you try to cut down/delete a few pages
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Rose
this one
2023-04-26
2
Abyss
this guy is
2023-04-20
2
Elizabeth Rose
I understand the need to explain the world and magic (max 2 pages) and the into (approx 2 pages) some notes from author this should take about 7 pages. 16 not many people will stick with this story no matter how great it looks for this long... I suggest you try to cut down/delete a few pages
2023-04-18
2