author there have been many times now that the next sentence doesn't match the previous one and the scene changes halfway and the readers are left confused.....the story is very amazing but this factor hinders the reading ability and pulls the readers out of the scene and left in confusion....please take a note of this for future works
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author there have been many times now that the next sentence doesn't match the previous one and the scene changes halfway and the readers are left confused.....the story is very amazing but this factor hinders the reading ability and pulls the readers out of the scene and left in confusion....please take a note of this for future works
2024-11-28
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Althea Manuel
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2023-07-12
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