Hii Author... I wanna say your story was good and beautiful. But I kinda didn't like how the one party is suffering in the beginning but the one who gave the pain is reborn and correct his mistake easily without any sufferings 💔.
No hate but from my perspective it was unfair and unjust to one who has suffer due to one's misunderstanding and Jealousy. It's just I thought it was unfair for our bunny 🐰 so thought to share with you. Over all it was a great work 👍 👏.
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Very nice story.
2024-07-26
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Crystal Snow
Hii Author... I wanna say your story was good and beautiful. But I kinda didn't like how the one party is suffering in the beginning but the one who gave the pain is reborn and correct his mistake easily without any sufferings 💔.
No hate but from my perspective it was unfair and unjust to one who has suffer due to one's misunderstanding and Jealousy. It's just I thought it was unfair for our bunny 🐰 so thought to share with you. Over all it was a great work 👍 👏.
2023-07-11
2
~Min♡Lachimolala~
beautiful story
2023-04-07
0