Too much unnecessary details author. They're kinda irritating and boring. Try to give less details in those parts which are not necessary from the next story. Also, you should use "." when you write more than one sentences. Thank you
2024-08-18
1
꧁༺ӄɨʍ ʝɛօռ ʝʊռɢӄօօӄ༻꧂
Jinni eomma /Whimper/
2024-08-07
4
bad girl t
mine is after 6 months and here I am fooling around
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RaYA•••
Too much unnecessary details author. They're kinda irritating and boring. Try to give less details in those parts which are not necessary from the next story. Also, you should use "." when you write more than one sentences.
Thank you
2024-08-18
1
꧁༺ӄɨʍ ʝɛօռ ʝʊռɢӄօօӄ༻꧂
Jinni eomma /Whimper/
2024-08-07
4
bad girl t
mine is after 6 months and here I am fooling around
2024-08-02
1