I don't know about others, but I really enjoyed reading the story. True, there were some grammatical mistakes and some plot lines are not as "profound" as some people want it to be. But, in my opinion, this story showed how people actually react to situations. Like the childish and immature way you portrayed the characters, in real life situations, we don't usually think about things and just assume everything. These types of stories are what teaches us not to be so impulsive in our daily life. To think about the consequences and other probabilities, and to keep in mind the other person's perspective. Not every main character in every story has to be perfect. Otherwise what would we learn from the story? Would we really enjoy reading stories if all of them had perfect lead characters? I highly doubt it. So author, I hope that you don't feel too upset about the negative side and focus more on all the positives. Optimism will be a great tool on the road to happiness and success. Please keep writing more stories and getting better at the art of storytelling, author ❤️
2024-03-25
1
Destroyer💜💜💜
Don't think about these kind of comments or people Author They are criticising you just because you are so good then them
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bloom❤
I really liked this story , ❤❤❤❤
2024-12-09
0
D̆̈ă̈s̆̈h̆̈.ꌚꍏꀤ❣️480
I don't know about others, but I really enjoyed reading the story. True, there were some grammatical mistakes and some plot lines are not as "profound" as some people want it to be.
But, in my opinion, this story showed how people actually react to situations. Like the childish and immature way you portrayed the characters, in real life situations, we don't usually think about things and just assume everything. These types of stories are what teaches us not to be so impulsive in our daily life. To think about the consequences and other probabilities, and to keep in mind the other person's perspective. Not every main character in every story has to be perfect. Otherwise what would we learn from the story? Would we really enjoy reading stories if all of them had perfect lead characters? I highly doubt it.
So author, I hope that you don't feel too upset about the negative side and focus more on all the positives. Optimism will be a great tool on the road to happiness and success.
Please keep writing more stories and getting better at the art of storytelling, author ❤️
2024-03-25
1
Destroyer💜💜💜
Don't think about these kind of comments or people Author They are criticising you just because you are so good then them
2024-02-10
2