hi author, this is my second comment on this story, I wished to say that I really enjoyed this story, though I do apologize for skipping a few chapters at the beginning, I hate too much angst, so I skipped the part where he forced himself on her the first time. but I got a note I wanted to shed the light on, the story is beautiful and has great potential, but the way they fell in love was too rushed and sudden, you didn't gave it the time and the chance to showcase its growth. I hope you aren't offended, but take it as a note to look at for your next work. good luck author on your next works
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Mïçkèy Lövé
such a wonderful story /Smile//Smile/
2025-01-07
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𓆩❦nebulous dreamer❦𓆪
hi author, this is my second comment on this story, I wished to say that I really enjoyed this story, though I do apologize for skipping a few chapters at the beginning, I hate too much angst, so I skipped the part where he forced himself on her the first time. but I got a note I wanted to shed the light on, the story is beautiful and has great potential, but the way they fell in love was too rushed and sudden, you didn't gave it the time and the chance to showcase its growth. I hope you aren't offended, but take it as a note to look at for your next work.
good luck author on your next works
2024-08-06
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