Author your story is nice but what happened after that? Babies, what about them? And who and why killed Lily? And who shot Luna? Why?
2023-12-11
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Janee
well you can write much better than this
2023-11-22
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dhanu
no you write nice it is just that I am expecting happy ending you write very quite nice 😍🥰 do not give up on your writing career give us Mafia type story 😍😍😘😘😘 best of luck for next text chat story😍😘
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Angel of Death
Author your story is nice but what happened after that? Babies, what about them? And who and why killed Lily? And who shot Luna? Why?
2023-12-11
1
Janee
well you can write much better than this
2023-11-22
0
dhanu
no you write nice it is just that I am expecting happy ending you write very quite nice 😍🥰 do not give up on your writing career give us Mafia type story 😍😍😘😘😘 best of luck for next text chat story😍😘
2023-11-22
1