to be honest, I was not talking about the plot of your story but your writing style which is more confusing then the plot I have no problem with the plot and actually like how this is going but I think it's just the way you wrote it is all over the place . hate at all I just wanted to share my opinion don't take it to your heart I just wanted you to know and please just read what you wrote it might make sense then to you in my it also help you understand what I is going now other than that I really like how the way the stories going 🤠
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to be honest, I was not talking about the plot of your story but your writing style which is more confusing then the plot I have no problem with the plot and actually like how this is going but I think it's just the way you wrote it is all over the place . hate at all
I just wanted to share my opinion don't take it to your heart I just wanted you to know and please just read what you wrote it might make sense then to you in my it also help you understand what I is going now other than that I really like how the way the stories going 🤠
2023-02-03
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