Dont get offended bt yeah if u r writing something u should plot a story in an order ...what u r doing is just so confusing.. as a reader we love twist bt not confusion ur every chap is having an open end and it didn't match well with the next update .. m not criticising ur effort bt I see the need to be truthful regarding this
2023-04-20
2
Lil sis chocky
All of you typing “more updates” are you sure you are understanding the story or you’re just to horny to observe how confusing this story is?
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Raksh Zameer
Dont get offended bt yeah if u r writing something u should plot a story in an order ...what u r doing is just so confusing.. as a reader we love twist bt not confusion ur every chap is having an open end and it didn't match well with the next update .. m not criticising ur effort bt I see the need to be truthful regarding this
2023-04-20
2
Lil sis chocky
All of you typing “more updates” are you sure you are understanding the story or you’re just to horny to observe how confusing this story is?
2022-12-08
1
winter bear 🐻
now I'm confused..🥺
2022-10-23
0