Author Nim i have liked your story very much but there are some grammatical error but yeah it's nothing cause I guess your native language is not english but yeah it has nothing to do with the story cause I like this story very much but yeah there are some errors I hope you can change it that's all thanks
2022-12-27
2
Ji-Na Kim
I don't know it but I am sure Maila didn't did anything
2022-12-27
1
Jacqueline
I don't think she did it I think he fainted due to too much stress
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Ji-Na Kim
Author Nim i have liked your story very much but there are some grammatical error but yeah it's nothing cause I guess your native language is not english but yeah it has nothing to do with the story cause I like this story very much but yeah there are some errors I hope you can change it that's all thanks
2022-12-27
2
Ji-Na Kim
I don't know it but I am sure Maila didn't did anything
2022-12-27
1
Jacqueline
I don't think she did it I think he fainted due to too much stress
2022-04-28
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