I'm sorry I don't mean to offend you authy. but it was supposed to be chat story but you're narrating each and every incident it makes the dialogues longer. you should try writing novels they sui you better. I definitely like the story but I would prefer if the characters have more conversations and less explanation of the situations.
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Ishika
I'm sorry I don't mean to offend you authy. but it was supposed to be chat story but you're narrating each and every incident it makes the dialogues longer. you should try writing novels they sui you better. I definitely like the story but I would prefer if the characters have more conversations and less explanation of the situations.
2024-01-05
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Anonymous
shouldn't this be the narrator's dialogue?
2022-03-23
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