hello author I don't understand story line because of some conversations please write clearly when the story start and end and then funny conversations but I feel like your writing all mixed together so i can't understand please don't misunderstand me I'm not giving you any negitive or bad comments your story line is very good but i can't understand the way of your writing so please write clearly.thank you
2022-10-16
0
panda 🐼 YS
Doraemon 😱😱😱... bhi other level.. heavy driver good 👍
2022-01-24
1
𝚃ₐϞ𝗶𝕪ά ◦•˙°♫
ofcourse it is...ur chapter's are long and u still update daily....and here's me my novel chapter are not long but I still update in a week .....I am such a lazy author 😂😂😂😂
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Hyndhavi.G DAM_57
hello author I don't understand story line because of some conversations please write clearly when the story start and end and then funny conversations but I feel like your writing all mixed together so i can't understand please don't misunderstand me I'm not giving you any negitive or bad comments your story line is very good but i can't understand the way of your writing so please write clearly.thank you
2022-10-16
0
panda 🐼 YS
Doraemon 😱😱😱... bhi other level.. heavy driver good 👍
2022-01-24
1
𝚃ₐϞ𝗶𝕪ά ◦•˙°♫
ofcourse it is...ur chapter's are long and u still update daily....and here's me my novel chapter are not long but I still update in a week .....I am such a lazy author 😂😂😂😂
2022-01-15
1