one thing which I liked in your story is that you have written everything in a brief way. And if we will try to look at it clearly, it really sounds a bit peaceful tho. (I don't know others felt not, I am just keeping my views. The other next thing is I liked the character's thinking. If I would've been in her shoes, trusting someone again or making new friends after seeing our past friends betraying us is something which I won't do, but Sakura is doing, that's good
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2021-09-30
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good work.....👌👌👌
2021-09-27
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one thing which I liked in your story is that you have written everything in a brief way. And if we will try to look at it clearly, it really sounds a bit peaceful tho. (I don't know others felt not, I am just keeping my views.
The other next thing is I liked the character's thinking. If I would've been in her shoes, trusting someone again or making new friends after seeing our past friends betraying us is something which I won't do, but Sakura is doing, that's good
2021-09-27
2