In the first sentence with which the chapter started there is no need of "A"... The sentence should be like "Far far away from the end of earth" and then in "That place called as" this should be written like "That place is called as"
and the gifs and pictures you use in the story is really very good..!! And the plotline's progress is good..you are utilizing the plots you choosed in a good way and as their are mystery in the story it is making it more and more interesting...Keep-up the good work!!
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☆Gauri☆MTNp☆Inf☆
In the first sentence with which the chapter started there is no need of "A"... The sentence should be like "Far far away from the end of earth" and then in "That place called as" this should be written like "That place is called as"
and the gifs and pictures you use in the story is really very good..!! And the plotline's progress is good..you are utilizing the plots you choosed in a good way and as their are mystery in the story it is making it more and more interesting...Keep-up the good work!!
~Reader From MTN Community
2021-09-01
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