Dang. You just built on Ace's character more. I feel like he is going insane right now, more than he was before. Looking forward his schemes, and perhaps drama between Ace and Arc (I can feel it coming!). Also, reduce the 'info dumps.' I know that this chapter is crucial, but, you must not spoon-feed too much. Try to make it subtle, but obvious when the reader scrutinizes it.
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oreo
Dang. You just built on Ace's character more. I feel like he is going insane right now, more than he was before. Looking forward his schemes, and perhaps drama between Ace and Arc (I can feel it coming!). Also, reduce the 'info dumps.' I know that this chapter is crucial, but, you must not spoon-feed too much. Try to make it subtle, but obvious when the reader scrutinizes it.
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oreo
And who's talking?
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oreo
I'm confused. Who's sleepy?
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