Your novel is very nice and with good description but their are some grammatical mistakes which leads to a lot of confusion while reading like you have writed* he* as. "she" in yan Rong and in some episode the name are also wrong . hope you correct them , after correcting it will be more than good 👍
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クリシュナ( Krishna)
Your novel is very nice and with good description but their are some grammatical mistakes which leads to a lot of confusion while reading
like you have writed* he* as. "she" in yan
Rong and in some episode the name are also wrong .
hope you correct them , after correcting it will be more than good 👍
😊💜 😄
2021-07-08
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