author story moving fast also it's sometimes not linked . I know stories may be not logical. your s look like not logical really suddenly his lover show up to save and after escape he came to right place suddenly he kidnap tae because his first love was not success . sorry if I hurt you . as reader it's my opinion. please improve your story definitely many will like
2025-06-09
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AV⛧♛
it's feels kinda different to read after seeing V's insta story with song kang
2025-06-12
1
mr. bunny
your strartiNg is ok but after time passass it's became typical
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mr. bunny
author story moving fast also it's sometimes not linked . I know stories may be not logical. your s look like not logical really suddenly his lover show up to save and after escape he came to right place suddenly he kidnap tae because his first love was not success . sorry if I hurt you . as reader it's my opinion. please improve your story definitely many will like
2025-06-09
1
AV⛧♛
it's feels kinda different to read after seeing V's insta story with song kang
2025-06-12
1
mr. bunny
your strartiNg is ok but after time passass it's became typical
2025-06-09
1