I like the fact you chose character narration, feels like tea✨✨✨ However I spotted something a bit confusing. First she hid under the bed, then it was mentiones she was under the table, and then the bed sheet slid and revealed her... did you mean bed when you said table?🤔 or was it table? ~reader from HBC
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𝑴𝒔. 𝑷𝒓𝒆𝒔𝒊𝒅𝒆𝒏𝒕
I like the fact you chose character narration, feels like tea✨✨✨ However I spotted something a bit confusing. First she hid under the bed, then it was mentiones she was under the table, and then the bed sheet slid and revealed her... did you mean bed when you said table?🤔 or was it table?
~reader from HBC
2024-07-22
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Desi Oktafiani
So hooked! Don't stop writing, you've got a gift.
2024-07-06
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