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The Great 'What Is Even This?' Illness

the glowing ball

a young man was walking in a deep forest, following a strange glowing ball watching it dance in the air. after a while it stop and falls to the ground. the young man was about to touch it-
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Thaen....Thaen?
Thaen Simone (MC)
Thaen Simone (MC)
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Oi, sleeping beauty, Wake up!!
Thaen Simone (MC)
Thaen Simone (MC)
huh? (looks up)
Alan John(MC
Alan John(MC's bff)
bro, first period is over. we're heading to the next class
Thaen Simone (MC)
Thaen Simone (MC)
what? already?
Alan John(MC
Alan John(MC's bff)
yeah, unless you want to spend lunch in detention, come on let's go
Thaen Simone (MC)
Thaen Simone (MC)
Right...coming
Alan John(MC
Alan John(MC's bff)
you good? you look like you were daydreaming about something serious.
Thaen Simone (MC)
Thaen Simone (MC)
Nothing. just spacing out, i guess
Alan John(MC
Alan John(MC's bff)
well, snap out of it , Ms Salla's class is next and you know she doesn't play
Thaen Simone (MC)
Thaen Simone (MC)
alright am coming
Thaen grabs his bag, falls into step behind Alan, wondering what that strange glowing thing in the woods could've been..
Alan John(MC
Alan John(MC's bff)
.....
Alan was still looking at him, awaiting his reply
Thaen Simone (MC)
Thaen Simone (MC)
calm down will you, i told you am just tired
Alan John(MC
Alan John(MC's bff)
alright, if you say so

Draft

After school, on there way home
Alan John(MC
Alan John(MC's bff)
(glancing at Thaen) yo, seriously what's wrong with you today?
Thaen Simone (MC)
Thaen Simone (MC)
what do you mean?
Alan John(MC
Alan John(MC's bff)
you've been zoning out all day, you didn't even notice when Mr Kelito called on you
Thaen Simone (MC)
Thaen Simone (MC)
wait- he did?
Alan John(MC
Alan John(MC's bff)
And during math you looked like you were gonna pass out
Thaen Simone (MC)
Thaen Simone (MC)
what are you talking about, I'm fine
Alan John(MC
Alan John(MC's bff)
you don't look fine, you were sweating like you were given a math test, even Ms Salla kept looking at you like you were about to cause a drama
Thaen Simone (MC)
Thaen Simone (MC)
(thinking for a moment) i didn't notice, am probably just tired from todays training
Alan John(MC
Alan John(MC's bff)
yeah, well, tired people don't stare at their desk like it was hiding something
Thaen didn't reply, he didn't realized he was doing all that. they continue to walk in silence
Alan John(MC
Alan John(MC's bff)
.....
Alan John(MC
Alan John(MC's bff)
(sigh) *i wonder what's wrong with him*
Alan John(MC
Alan John(MC's bff)
*hope is nothing serious* (worried)

Draft

Thaen reached his home
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Thaen Simone (MC)
Thaen Simone (MC)
(taking off his shoes) Am back
Raemon Simone(ML
Raemon Simone(ML's father)
look who finally grace us with his presence
Thaen Simone (MC)
Thaen Simone (MC)
And look who still haven't moved from the couch since morning
Raemon Simone(ML
Raemon Simone(ML's father)
(scoffs) it's called resting the old bones, thank you very much
Thaen Simone (MC)
Thaen Simone (MC)
(laughs) More like fusing with the sofa
Raemon Simone(ML
Raemon Simone(ML's father)
(Smirks) keep talking young man, I'll tell your mom you failed math
Thaen Simone (MC)
Thaen Simone (MC)
....you wouldn't
Raemon Simone(ML
Raemon Simone(ML's father)
(grinning) try me
Thaen laughs, shakes his head and heads for his room
(sits on the bed)
Thaen Simone (MC)
Thaen Simone (MC)
Alan said i didn't look too well, like i wasn't really in the class. but i don't feel anything at all
Thaen Simone (MC)
Thaen Simone (MC)
(he stood up, walks to the mirror and watches himself) Nah. he is just messing with me again, right?
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his room
Thaen laid on his bed, staring at the ceiling with a thoughtful look
thinking about the glowing ball he saw in the forest a month ago
he looked at his left palm which touched it
Thaen Simone (MC)
Thaen Simone (MC)
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