Rewriting the Story
A mission
In a room swallowed by chaos, where stained mugs clung to windowsills like forgotten relics and mountains of laundry sagged under their own weight, the floor was a battlefield of crushed chips, sticky spills, and abandoned school papers. The curtains, once white, now hung like ghosts, gray with dust and curled at the edges. A single sock dangled from the ceiling light like a warning flag, and the air—thick, sour, and heavy—told stories of moldy leftovers, midnight snacks, and months without a proper clean. It wasn’t just messy—it was a kingdom of dirt, ruled by neglect and crowned with grime.
In the center of it all, half-buried in a beanbag and wearing slippers shaped like angry ducks, sat a girl, popcorn in hand and an expression full of regret. The TV blared with drama. Onscreen stood the male lead-Mr Lei screaming at a girl named Xiu.
Mr Lei
Why did you push Qin down the stairs, you serpent
Xiu
I didn't, please believe me, she intentionally fell to accuse me of pushing her
Qin
Honey just leave sister alone, it wasn't intentional
Mr Lei turned towards Qin
Mr Lei
Qin you have a very good soul unlike this wicked woman
Qin blushed for a second, Now the maids around at the time started whispering to themselves
maid
I wonder why Mrs Xiu would not give up on Mr Lei, even though she has been rejected by him many times
Second maid
You get it, but l heard Mrs Xiu has been in love with Mr Lei since she was a kid, and now it's hard to leave him.
Xiu
While the two maid gossip Mr Lei phone rang, and he picked it, after some seconds on the phone, he responded with I will be there in a few minutes, he then hung up, he faced Qin and hugged her telling her to take care of her selves. As Mr Lei ei proceeds to leave all maids departed with him except for Qin and Xiu maids.
Qin innocent face changed and faced Xiu
Qin
Let me tell you something as far as I have this tattooed birthmark Lei will believe I am the one who saved him, and he will treat me like a princess while you be a woman that chased a man and never got him
Xiu
Why are you deceiving Lei when you know I also have the birthmark and also my maid is a witness, all you have to do is wait for your end
Qin looked at her maid and she understood. She walked towards Xiu maid and pushed her out of the window leading to her death.
Xiu started to panic as Qin came closer to her
Qin
Now all I have to do is to tell Lei you killed her out of anger, and he will believe me
in the remaining of the story Qin lies against Xiu and Lei sent her to prison where she got mad and died
Meng
What, did the film company run out of writer and asked a carpenter to write them a story? Because I don't get why you would let a innocent maid to die for something that doesn't make sense.
As Meng was complaining she heard a voice saying "since you want to change the story then I will give you the chance". And after that sentence, everything started getting blurry and Meng fainted.
The next time Meng opened her eyes she found herself in a big space that filled with screens that were playing the movie she had just watched.I in awe Meng looked at her surrounding and wondered
After some seconds Meng saw a little child walking towards her.
Meng
Who are you and where am I
system
I am a system coded to control character in movies. And you are in the center of the movie world where I control everything that happens in this world
Meng
So may I ask why you have brought me here
system
There have been some problems with the movie plot and I can't fix them by myself
Meng
So why have you chosen me ?
system
Because I need someone who is about to die so I can reward them with more life when they finish the task I give them.
Meng was silent for some seconds before looking back at the system
system
I know but you are almost dieing
system
For a month now you have been eating junk food which is very unhealthy
Meng
So that means if I fulfill the mission you give me you will give me chance to live longer ?
Meng
what then happens if I don't fulfill my mission
system
I would not have any reason to make you live longer.
Meng
So then what is my mission?
system
You have to stop the villain from going to prison
Meng
Do you mean that love head?
system
And I will give you support so your mission will be more easy
Meng
So what character will I get?
Meng
I hope I will get a sensiiiiii. Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
Meng found herself falling ina a portal that looked like it never had an ending, she screamed until she fainted.
When she opened her eyes she found herself in a grand place which she recognized and she knew what plot she was in
Avoiding my death
Qin
Let me tell you something as far as I have this tattooed birthmark Lei will believe I am the one who saved him, and he will treat me like a princess while you be a woman that chased a man and never got him
Xiu
"Why are you lying to Lei when you know I have the birthmark too? My maid can confirm everything—she saw it all. Your time is up. All that's left is for you to face the end."
Meng
Shit, is this not the place the Old lady gets pushed out of the window, I've got to save her
Meng scanned the living room but she didn't see the maid
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Qin looked at her maid and she understood, she walked towards Xiu maid.....
Meng
Why is Qin maid walking towards me, did I become the old lady !!!!
Christ, I've got to run
Meng wanted to run, but a pain in her back blocked her from running quickly, seeing this another idea popped into Meng head
Meng
Madam Qin don't mind the words of Lady Xiu, Although you don't know, I admire you in secret and how you use your wonderful skills. It amazes me.
Meng bent her best to show more respect praying her would be safe
Qin maid stepped back and Meng knew she was safe.
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Meng gave a glance to Xiu who's face was filled with disbelief
Meng gives Xiu a look that tells her that she is still on her side
Qin,Meng and Qin maid walked out of the living room
In a corridor that exists in the big mansion, Qin and her maid are seen talking.
Qin maid
Why did you stop me from killing the maid, when she has lot of our secrets
Qin
Well you see, she seems to be a big fan of me and also I need her to perform some tasks for me
Qin maid
Why are you giving her a task when you have me?
Qin
It's more dangerous and I care about you and I don't want you to get hurt
Qin maid
You know I accepted this job knowing there are dangerous jobs there, so I will do anything even though it costs my life
Qin
Well I have got other jobs for you so focus on those ones.
Qin maid leaves the scene with anger on her.
Qin maid
I will never make her get my position, I have to deal with her
Xiu moves out
Dear readers I would like to inform you that Meng is now maid Lihua
The sound of a vehicle could be heard outside. Maid Lihua check out and saw it was Mr Lei vehicle and she called thel attention of the ladies who compete on who was going to get to Lei first.
Xiu was the first to get to Lei and greet him
Xiu
Afternoon Lei
How was work
But before he could answer a noise distracted him, and he looked over to the noise direction and saw Qin on the ground, with a face showing agony. In Panic Lei rushed towards Qin
Qin
Yes, I'm a bit injured and I don't think I can walk
Falling for Qin tricks again Lei carried Qin to his room leaving Xiu behind who was going to sob
Xiu
why does she have to do that all the time?
Maid Lihua who had witnessed the whole scene walked up to Xiu
Xiu
You betrayer why didn't you follow your new master
Maid Lihua
Well because I thought we needed More evidence against Miss Qin that was why I did that
Xiu
Are you sure, or you are with me or are you lying to me?
Maid Lihua
No, definitely not
Back to the room, Qin and Lei are seen together.
Mr Lei
Stay here I will go and call the doctor.
Qin said while holding Lei hands
Qin
As far as I am with you, I am okay
Lei sits on the bed next to Qin and placed her head on his shoulder
They stayed in that position for some minutes until Xiu came in
Xiu
Lei, I just thought that I should inform you before I leave
Maid Lihua
Miss Xiu I want to tell you something in mind I hope you do get angry with me.
Maid Lihua
I think if you want to get Mr Lei attention you should play hard to get
Maid Lihua
It's pretending to not care about someone in order to show them they need to value you
Xiu
And how can I do that?
Xiu held Maid Lihua hands wanting a answer
Maid Lihua
You have to start avoiding him, don't care when he's angry at you.
Maid Lihua
Then leave the house, reunite with your friends, go on a holiday, do things you love and make you happy, don't pick his call and don't reply his message, and I promise he will be dying for you.
Xiu
If that's going to make him discover how valuable I am then I'm ready to do it. I will just go and pack my bag.
In the corner where Qin Maid has been hiding.
Qin maid
Wow, what a great technique for a old piece of shit like you.
Qin maid
You think I don't know what you are trying to do, I'm sorry I do. And I will end you before you succeed.
Qin maid moved closer to Lihua and Lihua moved back l.
Qin maid
say it before you die then.
Lihua tried to think fast but her brain was not braining.
Maid Lihua
Erm... erm..... erm....
Qin maid
You think you can easily fool me?no!!!
As Qin maid planned to use her knife to kill Lihua, a voice was heard, causing Qin maid to withdraw her knife.
Butcher Zhi
Ladies I don't think anyone should be outside by now.
Qin maid
Oh yes that's true, we would just go back in
Qin maid held Lihua hand and pulled her inside.
Lihua knowing he had helped her gave him a little bow and he responded with a smile.
Xiu
I just think I should create some space for you and Qin, you guys deserve one.
In anger Lei reached out for Xiu neck and started strangling her and she fought for air.
Qin
Lei don't hurt sis she might die.
Lei let go of Xiu and she tries to catch her breath.
Xiu
Why would you strangle me because I want to go on a holiday???
Mr Lei
Because you are nothing to me and you should have left without informing me.
Xiu
Is that what you say about me?
Mr Lei
Pack your load completely and don't come back.
Xiu shouted to his face and stormed out of the room.
She packs her load and order an urban, she waved him hose who had been nice to her and the event was the talk of the day in Lei Mansion.
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