My Comic Commoner
chapter 1
The shattered pieces of the vase lie on the ground.
Choi Y/N
Why don't you ever understand me, Mom? *she shouts as tears runs down her pale face*
she stood there in front of her mom who is looking at y/n with anger in her eyes
Y/n's clothes where covered with dirt, her face has bruises and her lips were stained with scarlet blood of hers
Ms.Choi (y/n's mom)
That's enough, don't you ever raise your voice on me y/n! *her cold and serious voice echos through the room giving chills*
Choi Y/N
b-but....but...mom i-it wasn't my f-fault....*her voice was broken, and she feels like there are thorns in her throat which won't letting her speak for herself*
Ms.Choi (y/n's mom)
Stop giving me your filthy reasons, and go to your fucking room and wash yourself...*she says and starts walking away*
Y/n stood there, heartbroken and aching unbearably.
Ms.Choi (y/n's mom)
*her footsteps pauses, she looks at y/n over her shoulder without turning around* and as a punishment ere is no food for you tonight! Die with hunger....
her tone was still same, cold! She walked away even though her daughter was standing there lifeless and covered with bruises and blood
Choi Y/N
*she goes to her room even though her steps were heavy and painful to move*
Choi Y/N
*she shuts the door as she enters her dark room and falls down on the freezing floor against the door* what did I even do to deserve this....?..
y/n woke up and was ready to go to uni
Ms.Choi (y/n's mom)
Y/n…!!!!
Her mom calls as she was in hurry because she was getting late for her work
Ms.Choi (y/n's mom)
I cooked breakfast for you, and It's on the table and there's also money which i want you to give ms. Lee on your way…okay??!!…*she says in a hurry and leaves even before y/n could answer*
Choi Y/N
b-but mom-….*door shuts* uhh!!..*rolls her eyes in annoyance* I don't wanna go to that old lady again...*she mutter to herself*
y/n takes the money from the table which her mom wanted her to give to their landlady...
Y/n rings the bell, but there was no response
knocks on her door, but there was still no response
Choi Y/N
I guess that old ass isn't home…*she puts the money in her backpack* I need to give her in the evening!…*she storms off from there because she was already late*
As the day winds down, Y/N starts walking home early because she is tired from all those classes she attended, and it's already getting dark outside
She walks through the dark alleys while kicking stones and there was no one around but as She was going the laughing voices were heard and getting closer. she sees silhouettes of group of three guys standing not so far away
for a second she freezes and hesitates to walk further as she kinda had a bad feeling, but she is "stubborn" so she again starts to walk but as she was getting closer she felt stares of that guys, who were looking at her and laughs disappear...
Choi Y/N
*started to walk faster*
But the footsteps were heard which were following her
Her heart beat was increasing, and she was getting anxious, but she had guts to look behind
Choi Y/N
*looks behind, but they continued to walk towards*
She was in fight or flight situation, and she chose to run
as fast as she can, and they were running behind her,
Choi Y/N
w-who are you??!!...d-don't dare to come near me...*moves back as they were coming closer*
A big middle-aged man steps towards her and reaches her chin to make her face him
???
Look little girl….*holds her chin tighter* you look like a student so.. I'm sure you have something to give us.... don't you?...
Choi Y/N
What d-do you mean…?…. I..I have n-nothing…please let go! *she cries out as her grip on the backpack gets tighter*
???
*chuckles not bothered by her scared expression* check her!…*he orders to the other two men who watching from behind*
y/n tries to fight back, tries to run away, but she was a rat in lions den
As she reaches home she explains that she was robbed but her mom...🙄😮💨
They robbed 660,000KRW from her but it was tremendous to them because they were poor. Her mom runs a bakery and her dad....he died when y/n was born!
Author nim
Heyyyyy!!! Thanks for reading
Author nim
what do you guys think about this chapter?
Author nim
I know it was boring 😔but I promise I'll try to make good one 🤧🫶🫶
chapter 2
It's been 4 hours, the blood on her lips has em browned and bruises on her face has darkened
Choi Y/N
*the vision was blurry*
she tries to sit up but because of her injured leg she struggles
Choi Y/N
it still hurts….ouch.. *stands up*
Choi Y/N
*checks her mobile*
Choi Y/N
hm...?*as she checks a smirk forms on her lips*
Choi Y/N
12:00....*her voice breaks as she mumbles* happy birthday y/n...
She wished herself more like she cursed under her breath
she walks to her window where moon light was shining like a diamond on a dark background
she sat on the window trim and tears were rolling down her face unconsciously
Choi Y/N
*sobs* I….I.. Miss you, dad...*she tries to speak looking at the moon* I want to come to you
Choi Y/N
I never really felt happy on this day every year 😔... everyone says I'm a bad omen
Choi Y/N
they bully me saying...you were gone because I was born😓 you could've taken me with you dad....
She cries out her sorrow as She lies her head on her knees
As sun rays interrupt her sleep, y/n wakes up
Choi Y/N
*checks the alarm* why didn't it work?!!!...*she curses*
Choi Y/N
I'm getting late and why didn't mom-...*she pauses as she remembers what happened yesterday* is she still angry on me?...😔
As she took the backpack and shuts the door behind her, she looks around if her mom was there
But she has already gone to her work and she hasn't even made her breakfast
Choi Y/N
*stomach rumbles*
Choi Y/N
does she not remember?...*muttered to herself and locks the door*
y/n walks her way to the uni with a nonchalant face but inside her heart was broken into pieces, her body was aching and was hungry! in conclusion, she was in a miserable state
The sun was intense and y/n was feeling dizzy
Choi Y/N
My head spins....why is it getting blurry? And my body is getting numb-...
Author nim
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chapter 3
Choi Y/N
*slowly opens her eyes*
Granny
are you okay child?...*smiles*
Choi Y/N
uh…mn....*tries to sit up* wh-who are you...?
Choi Y/N
😐😐 I haven't joked though..
Granny
*caresses y/n's hair while holding onto her crutch*
Granny
aren't you hungry child?..
Choi Y/N
Hungry?..n-no...and wh-what time is it?….*checks her phone from the backpack* 😮💨 *sIgns* I'm already late..they won't allow me even if i go now *she mumbles*
Choi Y/N
*stomach rumbling* 😳😳
Granny
it's okay child...you wanna come over to my place? I'll give you some food...☺️
Choi Y/N
um…b-but…*y/n stutters while looking down as she was embarrassed*
Granny
it's okay…it's not far away, just a 2-min walk..
Y/n rethinks and doesn't wanna go but the state she was in was not in her favor and she might faint again if she doesn't eat now, so she hesitantly picks up her things and walks with that granny
They both silentlY walks. y/n was just lost in thoughts thinking she might be in trouble if her mother gets to know that she have missed the classes today…
Choi Y/N
Huh?…*she looks up*
Granny
are you thinking something?
Granny
then here we are…*she points at a library*
Choi Y/N
what are we gonna do at library?
It looks like a very old library not like the modern ones, and it's board sign saying "Gyujangjuk library est.1776"
Choi Y/N
Gyujangjuk...?*mumbles*
Choi Y/N
*her eyes widened* 177-...1776??!!!!!!! *her jaw drops*
Granny
*smiles* come inside child *walks in and y/n follows behind*
Granny
why are you shocked??☺️
Choi Y/N
i-it's reanlly a old library isn't it?..
Granny
yeah…*coughs* it…it was established in Joseon dynasty!
Choi Y/N
Eh? *laughs* stop joking granny! Joseon dynasty? 🤣
Choi Y/N
*looks at granny, but she was kinda glaring at her, so she somehow stops laughing* you were being serious i guess…😐
Granny
please feel home child I'll bring you something…
Y/n walks around that small library which was nearly looking like a haunted house without bats
There were lamps in place of modern tube lights or LED lights and books where covered with spider webs
she sees a table near a bookshelf and sits down
Choi Y/N
*signs* this place is kinda sus… I'll go home once I eat something
Choi Y/N
*looks around* this can really be from Joseon?in 2025? That doesn't make sense and... I'm sure that old thing is lying to me…*mumbles*
Granny
Sorry for making you wait child *she sits opposite to y/n placing the momo she bought*
Granny
*chuckles* please eat them, they are hot
Choi Y/N
*nods being embarrassed that her stomach making noises at the sight food*
Choi Y/N
thanks for the food granny…*she eats them* they are really tasty
Granny
really…? Then eat more child
Choi Y/N
thanks it tastes like the one my mom makes...
Granny
🥰☺️glad you enjoyed
Y/n finish eating the momos until her stomach was full, and the granny was looking at her even while she was eating
Choi Y/N
*looks at her* is something wrong?
Granny
*shakes her head in denial* nothing kid
Choi Y/N
c-can i ask you something?
Choi Y/N
um..*looks at her crutch* what happened to your leg?
Granny
*looks at her own leg* this?
Granny
it was an accident child *her face had no expression and became pale*
Choi Y/N
accident??! *frowns*
Granny
yes…*her voice became dull* an accident that took everything from me, even my leg
Choi Y/N
do you want to tell me about it?
Y/n asked while she slowly held the wrinkled hand because she understood the pain and sorrow in her voice
Granny
I had a grandchild, when my son and my daughter-in-law died she was just a child, I raised her
Choi Y/N
What happened to her?
Granny
*looks at y/n* she looks like you, one day she told me she'll take me somewhere and we both were going a-and….and..*her voice broke*
Choi Y/N
and the accident happened?...*she asked in a whisper tone*
Granny
*nods* yeah…while she tired to save my life she lost her life...since then I've been alone in this old library..
Choi Y/N
I-…um I'm sorry… I shouldn't have asked 😔
Granny
it's okay child, and it's her birthday today…my girl would've been turned 21 today...
*y/n eyes were shot open, and her hand was taken aback*
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