Lily lay on her king-size bed, surrounded by white walls and black shells. Her long eyelashes fluttered open, and she checked the time: 8:17 AM. Panicked, she jumped out of bed.

"Oh no, I'm late for Jasmine's baby shower!" she exclaimed.

At twenty-four, Lily had recently graduated from the University of Scotland with a doctorate degree. She was awaiting feedback on her hospital interview application.

Rushing to get ready, Lily put on a pink dress that fell three inches above her knees, showcasing her slender legs. She paired it with pink slippers, a silver choker, and silver earrings, completing the look with a pink clutch purse.

Grabbing her silver Mercedes keys, Lily drove to the mansion, arriving at 9:11 AM. She hurried to Jasmine's room and knocked.

"Sorry I'm late; I overslept," Lily said, entering the room.

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After two hours, they went downstairs. Jasmine soon retreated upstairs, exhausted. Lily stayed for another thirty minutes before following suit. As she climbed the stairs, she failed to notice a pebble and slipped, falling.

In mid-air, she thought, "I don't want my body broken." Suddenly, a tight grip grasped her waist, breaking her fall. She opened her eyes to meet emerald green eyes that took her breath away.

For minutes, they locked gazes. Their trance broke when a feminine voice interrupted, "Kill, what are you doing here?"

The guy released Lily's waist and turned. "What do you want, Vivian?"

Vivian snapped, "I don't care. Why are you holding another girl? Your fiancée—"

"Vivian, I'm sorry," Kill interjected.

Lily, confused, asked, "Who are you, and what's going on?"

Vivian's tone turned arrogant. "You're at my sister's baby shower. Who are you?"

Lily explained, "I'm Lily, part of the second family of the top seven powerful families in the country."

Vivian's demeanor shifted, now harsh and intimidating. "You shouldn't be here. This is private property."

Lily retreated, fearful. "I apologize; I didn't know."

Vivian warned, "Don't mess with the Sarah family. They won't forgive easily."

Lily quickly ascended upstairs. Kill watched her leave, admiration in his eyes.

"Kill, what are you doing here?" Vivian repeated.

"Why do you care?" Kill replied.

"I'm your fiancée," Lily said.

Kill explained, "I was forced into the engagement, but I'm not married."

Vivian ordered, "Follow me home."

Lily refused, "I sent my driver home. I'll go with you."

Vivian hurried to her car, with Kill following.

Meanwhile, inside the mansion, Lily helped Jasmine wrap baby gifts.

"This one's cute," Lily said.

"Let's go baby shopping tomorrow," Jasmine suggested.

Lily hesitated. "I have plans with James."

Jasmine expressed concern. "I don't like James. He's trouble."

Lily agreed. "I think I'm in a loveless relationship."

Jasmine advised, "Don't stay. Find a way out."

Lily resolved, "I'll break up with him."

Jasmine invited, "Visit me tomorrow night."

Lily accepted. "I'll come after changing."

As Lily left, she drove to her mansion, where her maid greeted her with a smoothie.

Upstairs, Lily tosssed her drink into the trash after she was done.

After finishing her smoothie, Lily tossed the container into the trash and headed to her bedroom. She showered and dressed in a yellow tank top, long black pants, and a black leather jacket, completing her outfit with a black stud earring and black eye shadow. She chose her black sports car from her collection of over 40 vehicles and drove to the estate.

Upon arrival, security let her in, and she entered the room to find Leo and Jasmine kissing. She burst out laughing, and Jasmine awkwardly introduced the kids. Lily sat down, composing herself, and said, "I can't believe I just saw that! You broke rule 137."

"Shut up," Leo said.

"You owe me a favor," Lily replied.

"Alright, I will," Leo and Jasmine said in unison.

"Yes, what do you want?" Leo asked.

"I'll decide later," Lily said.

Just then, the door flung open, and Nico and Sarah, Simon's wife, walked in. "It seems you've forgotten us," Nico said.

Jasmine rushed to greet her parents. "Hi, Mom and Dad! How are you doing?"

Simon asked, "Which month are you now, Jasmine?" eyeing her bulging belly.

"This is the most critical month; take care of yourself," Nicola advised.

As they discussed necessary matters, Lily realized it was almost 9 PM. She and her dad reviewed documents for two hours, discussing her application.

"Princess, how's your application going?" Simon asked.

"They said they'll send an email. I hope it's positive," Lily replied.

Simon chuckled. "With my name on the application, it's sure to be."

Later, when Lily entered her bedroom, she was surprised to find a newly decorated room in purple with a large baby picture portrait above her king-sized bed and childhood memories plastered on the walls.

"Do they really think I'm still a child?" she wondered.

After a bath, Lily changed into a black dress showcasing her curves and styled her hair into a ponytail. She stared at the ceiling, lost in thought.

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*The Next Morning*

Lily woke up to her phone ringing. She groggily checked the caller ID and saw Maggie's name.

"Maggie, what's up?" Lily answered, still half asleep.

"Meet me at the park at 4 PM," Maggie said.

"Whatever," Lily replied, trying to shake off the sleep.

Just as she hung up, James called.

"Hey, Lily, don't forget our plans today," James reminded her.

"Okay, text me the address," Lily said.

After the call, Lily got ready. She chose a stylish outfit: a purple plated scarf, white shirt, silver chain, silver earring, black bomber jacket, white clutch bag, and a signature ring on her index finger.

As she left the mansion, James texted her to meet at Seyo Cafe instead.

Lily drove to the cafe, arriving at 12 PM.

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_MetaSim Mansion, 12:00 PM_

William Peterson , a member of the influential Peterson family, stood in his mansion, his face red with rage. He addressed his son, cale, who appeared to be in his late twenties.

"I don't care about your opinion!" William bellowed. "You will marry her Your loyalty is to the Peterson family "

Cale's expression remained icy. "I never remember having her in the conversation," he said, his voice cold.

"She's your stepmother, young man!" William emphasized.

In his fury, William seemed to forget that freya was Cale's stepmother, not his biological mother.

"You will do as I say, cale " William demanded. "Serve the peterson family interests, no matter what."

Cale's anger boiled over, and he stormed out of the mansion.

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Chapter 3:An Unexpected Request

Lily stepped into the cozy cafe and spotted James sitting by the window. She walked over to him, curiosity etched on her face.

"What brought me here?" Lily asked, getting straight to the point.

The waitress interrupted, "Welcome to Cafe Bliss! Can I take your order?"

James smiled mischievously. "I'll have a strawberry ice cream with extra cream mousse, rainbow sprinkles, and a cherry on top."

Lily ordered simply, "Just coffee for me, thank you."

As the waitress left, James turned serious. "Lily, I need your help. I require seventy thousand dollars today."

Lily's eyebrows shot up. "What's this for? Didn't I give you one hundred thousand dollars just last week? And aren't you working?"

James looked sheepish. "My salary is too low."

Lily's expression turned stern. "Your salary is five hundred thousand dollars, courtesy of my conversation with your boss. What more do you want?"

James' eyes widened, and he protested, "I...I didn't know."

Lily's tone softened, "Fine. I'll transfer sixty thousand dollars. Find the rest yourself."

James beamed with gratitude. "Thanks, Lily!"

As Lily paid for their orders – three hundred dollars for the coffee and ice cream – James couldn't help but think, "She's not only stunning but also a jackpot." He left the cafe, feeling relieved.

Lily, meanwhile, remembered her meeting with Jenny at Amazing Park. She hastily paid, using her card, and rushed out. Her luxurious car roared to life as she sped away.

Little did James know, Lily's wealth was merely a fraction of her remarkable life. With over nine hundred billion dollars in her account, she was a force to be reckoned with. Yet, her boyfriend's humble job and James' relentless requests remained a puzzle.

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"I won't marry Vivian," Cale declared, his voice firm.

"Cale, calm down, son," his stepmother, freya, implored.

Cale's response was icy. "You're not part of this conversation."

Williams, Cale's father, intervened, his anger rising. "That's your mother you're speaking to, young man!"

Cale snapped back, "I think you forgot she's my stepmother at this point."

With that, Cale stormed out of the mansion, leaving his family in stunned silence Cale's response was icy. "You're not part of this conversation."

Williams, Cale's father, intervened, his anger rising. "That's your mother you're speaking to, young man!"

Cale snapped back, "I think you forgot she's my stepmother at this point."

With that, Cale stormed out of the mansion, leaving his family in stunned silence.

Cale's response was icy. "You're not part of this conversation."

Williams, Cale's father, intervened, his anger rising. "That's your mother you're speaking to, young man!"

Cale snapped back, "I think you forgot she's my stepmother at this point."

With that, Cale stormed out of the mansion, leaving his family in stunned silence. he drived like a mad man towards the hospital