Clock is ticking, my mind is screaming, pressure is giving me hard time thinking.

Due dates coming, day shifts ending I think, I need an Overtime in this evening.

This routine repeats, I'm already beat for three days straight of working.

I'm going home and I checked my phone, but nothing remembers me maybe I'm already forgotten.

I already take a bus and the drivers driving on a rush.

Exhausted and tired that's what my body's saying, maybe this is the price of overworking.

The bus has stopped, I already dropped, and I think my head is going to pop.

I'm already Home but no body's home maybe they only need to make things done.

I need to rest and I think it's the best to get some sleep and forget the rest.

I hear a voice and some noise.

"Wake up! Luis"

I open my eyes, and there's someone there.

Her hair were long and black. Her eyes are attractive like a stars at night.

Her voice is sweet as diabetes and her skin is as white as snow.

"Who are you?"

"I am one of the guardians of this World, my name is agony"

"Agony, what do you mean this world?"

She smile and stares at me for a while.

"Agony, where am I and what am I doing here?"

Her voice and face suddenly change. Her eyes become pure black and her face slowly turns creepy as hell. Her aura gives my body chills and

She laughs likes she's dying to kill.

"Luis, you're under a state of nightmare which gives you a chance to live or die and I am here to give you a simple information

About this world."

My sweat is dropping as she come near I felt nothing else but fear and as I close my eyes I hear her screams.

"AHHHHHH!"

I open my eyes and I saw how

She's tired of suffering mentally and physically and as I saw her agony I felt that's a reflection of me. I gathered the strength to speak.

"Ahg-Agony, I want to live! So tell me how I can go back to the real world."

She walks near to Luis and smirk. Her face slowly changing as he tilt her head left and right till it becomes beautiful girl that i saw lately.

"Have I told you already that I will only give you basic information about this world Luis so listen carefully? This world is like a game and

The players were all human under the state of extreme nightmare or under comatose. Each player needs to complete every quest given in order to

Survive in real world. Every Quest has a time limit because you are a disciple of me Agony!"

She changed her voice into a sound like comes from the bottom of the well and turns her scary creepy face on.

"Don't worry your only in a state of nightmare you can finish Quest in a very short time so you might get die fast."

I don't know if she's getting sarcastic or what.

"Agony, is there any rules or law in this world?"

She smirk and her face became normal.

"Luis, listen carefully the only rule in this world is to survive at your own freewill. Only you can decide if you want to live miserable or not.

Only your heart can determine extreme happiness and lastly not all the things that you may see is true."

"Agony, I will live on what my heart desires so bless and guide me in this world."

She smiles like roses in the dusk.

"Luis, before I bestow my blessings upon you. Try to focus then swing your right hand horizontally."

Luis tried to swing his right hand horizontally.

"You will see a transparent screen that shows of your equipment's, traits, items, status and skills.

[Equipment] are classified as [common], [uncommon], [rare], [unique], [legendary], [mythical], and [godlike].

[Traits] are the characteristic of that person in real life and in this world.

Items can consumable, usable, etc.

[Status] are classified as [H],[G],[F],[E],[D],[C],[B],[A],[S],[SS],[SSS]. [H] is the lowest rank while [SSS] is the highest.

[Skill] ranking is classified like [status]."

[Equipment]:

[Upper Clothing] =[Uncommon] Expensive Polo (Black).

expensive good looking polo.

Effect:

Defense +1

Charm +15

Price:

1 gold coin.

[Lower Clothing] = [Uncommon] Expensive Pants (Cream).

expensive looking pants.

Effect:

Defense +1

Charm +15

Price:

70 silver coins.

[Shoes] = [Uncommon] Formal Top sider (Brown).

Classy formal footwear.

Effect:

Defense +1

Charm +10

Price:

50 silver coins.

[Accessory 1] = [Uncommon] Formal Looking Stainless Watch (Silver).

Helps to determine time.

Effect:

Defense +1

Charm +10

Price:

50 silver coins

[Accessory 2] = empty

[Necklace] = empty

[Companion] = empty

[Left hand weapon] = empty

[Right hand weapon] = empty

[Headgear] = empty

[Appearance]

[Hair] = Fade (black)

[Eyes] = Strong looking eyes (dark brown)

[Skin colour] = Light Brown

[Eyebrows] = Thick semi-Straight (black)

[Height] = 5'10

[Gender] = Male

[Traits]

Hard working, Gentleman, Loyal, Understanding, Jolly, and good sense of Humour.

Nothing Special.

**.

Don't remind me of that please.

[Status]

Strength = 40(H)

Agility = 36(H)

Intelligence = 27(H)

Vitality = 28(H)

Dexterity = 28(H)

Luck = 20(H)

Charm = 70(H)

Physical Power = 32 - 47

Magical Power = 12 - 30

Health Points = 225/225

Mana = 100/100

Hit rate = 100

Movement speed = 100

Body coordination = 100

Critical rate = 10%

Critical Defense = 0

[Skills]

[Pressure Resistance [C]: Passive skill]

Effect:

Enable to resist pressure.

[Endurance [D]: Passive skill]

Effect:

Enable to Endure Average mental and physical damage.

[The rise of sadness [B]: Active skill]

Effect:

Enable to resist and hold sadness for a while and share it to anyone.

*note makes the person happy or even more sad can also applies on the listener.

"Luis, before you go please draw something in this box."

She shakes the box, and smiles like a fox.

"Agony, what's this?"

"Just Draw!"

As I put my hand inside the box, I've been reaching and searching for nothing. I felt I got something and as I pull my hands along with that thing.

I saw it glow until it shows, it a card!

"Agony, what's this?"

"Luis, are you blind? Can't you see it's a skill you idiot! You can use is or sell it if you want."

Skill Card: [Physical Strengthening [C]: Active Skill]

Effect:

Boost your physical strength.

"Luis, catch this!"

Swoosh!

As she a throws a knife, and I tried to save my life, Clack! she's smile for a while.

It missed!

"Are going to kill me Agony"

"Not yet Luis, I want you to entertain me more, show me more of your agony more and even more!"

As she fades in the dark, and leaves no mark.

My sweat is dripping and as my fear starts stirring upon the shadows I hear her screaming!

""

Chilling and freezing from the stare she's bringing.

Smiling while her head is tilting while walking towards me then her suddenly speak.

"Did I scare you? Luis"

I can't even move or speak.

Then I suddenly remember all the fearful and painful things in my life.

It hurts my soul down from its core, that feeling that everyone sees me as a sore.

Agony is shown over my face until I felt a warm embrace.

"Luis, agony is a part of our soul it may become a weakness or a strength. When it takeovers all of your soul weakness shall reign but

When you overcome that agony new strength will be regain."

"Upon my Blessings upon my name I hereby gave you the gift of agony to reign thy soul."

Light became stronger and stronger as she fades in the light my body became warmer and as I close my eyes I heard her.

"Be strong Luis pain will fades away as time passes by to thy day and night."

----End of Chapter 1----

Luis hear the wind blows through the leaves of the trees, the bird sings as gently it can be, and he hears peace in the surroundings.

Till he open his eyes and he sees tall trees and greenest grass he ever seen in his whole life.

He hears water rushing gently upon a stream as he come near the stream.

Luis starts drinking the water and it's so sweet and cold.

Luis walk around the forest and follow the stream flows in order to locate some village but

Suddenly he saw a rabbit standing and holding a blunt full of blood and murderous vibe around

Its eyes were red as blood and its teeth were sharp as knife.

*inner mind 'what the *** is that! How can a rabbit stand on its own two feet and it's taller than me.

Its eyes become black and stops, he listen very carefully to the surroundings.

[Freaking Rabbit] [D] Rank monster

-Can evolve to Extreme Freak Rabbit

-Unusual Attack patterns

-Carnivores

Its eyes turn red and growl so fearful.

"GROWWWWWWWWL!"

"Oh Shoot! I can't barely move"

[System notice!]

-you've been stunned.

As the freaking rabbit runs towards me it pick up the blunt weapon and swing it around to everything that goes near him.

[Quest!]

The attack of a rabbit.

-nothing particular you're just going to die if you read this too much have fun and survive the attack.

[Time Limit]

-Till morning

-12:00Hrs and 23 Mins Remaining.

[Reward]:

-Item loot box x1

As the rabbit try to hit me luckily I fall on the ground and evade most of the damage.

[System notice!]

-you gained luck!

Luck +1

Your luck is now 21(H).

"Shit I might die right now and it's not a game like play my wounds hurts like hell, I need to do something."

"I almost forgot that I have a skills."

"Physical Strengthening!"

Suddenly his body becomes lighter and stronger than before.

to buy time he run and hide to the boulder near the stream.

Swings right hand and clicked storage.

-[Unknown Knife]

Attack:??

Effect:??

"I should equip the knife before he finds me and kill me"

Do you want to equip Unknown Knife?

[Y/N?]

Heavily breathing and blood is dripping.

[System notice!]

-congratulations you successfully equip [Unknown Knife!]

"GROWWWWWWWWL"

[System notice!]

-you've been detected.

-you've been stunned.

The freaking rabbit smashed the boulder that into pieces "Boom!" before Luis tries to evade it he have been hit and suffers in pain.

As the pain fades away, Luis jump towards the freaking rabbit and try to cut its head using his knife "Swoosh!".

The rabbit duck and the giant rock behind was cut clean and straight "Boom!".

The freaking rabbit shoves Luis and hit him but he block the attack.

"Uahhhk!"

Luis flew through the air till he hit large boulder stone "Boom!".

*Cough

*Cough

Blood comes out from my mouth and the freaking rabbit runs toward him.

Smiling and excited to eat his prey but he suddenly stops.

It's Stares towards Luis and he's in state of shock.

Luis did not recognize that his knife is oozing with dark smokes that gave him chills down from the spine.

As he recovered from the damage that the freaking rabbit dealt.

Luis run so fast towards the rabbit and swing the knife to hit its stomach and the freaking rabbit tried to block it but he was too slow to react.

As he swing his hand upon with a knife. He felt nothing else but the urge to survive.

The rabbit berserk and swing it's blunt violently to Luis

"Clang, Clang, Clang"

Luis tries his best to block the attack until he finds an opening he cuts the freaking rabbit hands.

The freaking rabbit is screaming so loud because of the pain that Luis dealt.

The freaking rabbit was terrified and run covered in blood screaming in pain.

"URGHHHHHH"

"Now you're screaming in pain freak rabbit!"

The freaking rabbit is screaming in pain and Luis cuts its head as fast as he could so he won't hear the irritating scream of the rabbit.

[System notice!]

-You level up!

-You level up!

-You level up!

-You level up!

-You level up!

-You level up!

-You level up!

-You level up!

-You level up!

-You level up!

-You level up!

-Congratulations for activating the Agony's blessing skill

[Quest cleared!]

-You gained Item loot box x1

[Status]

Strength = 40(H)

Agility = 36(H)

Intelligence = 27(H)

Vitality = 28(H)

Dexterity = 28(H)

Luck = 20(H)

Charm = 70(H)

Physical Power = 32 - 47

Magical Power = 12 - 30

Health Points = 45/524

Mana = 100/100

Hit rate = 100

Movement speed = 100

Body coordination = 100

Critical rate = 10%

Critical Defense = 0

Unused points: 50

[Skills]

[Pressure Resistance [C]: Passive skill]

Effect:

Enable to resist pressure.

[Endurance [D]: Passive skill]

Effect:

Enable to Endure Average mental and physical damage.

[The rise of sadness [B]: Active skill]

Effect:

Enable to resist and hold sadness for a while and share it to anyone.

*note makes the person happy or even more sad can also applies on the listener.

[Physical Strengthening [C]: Active Skill]

Effect:

Boost your physical strength.

[Agony's Blessing [A]]

Effect:

Boost your damage when suffering.

[Special Effects:]

??

??

??

Luis puts 30 points to strength, 10 to agility and the remaining points to dexterity.

[Status]

Luis Falls

Human

Level 11

Strength = 70(H)

Agility = 46(H)

Intelligence = 27(H)

Vitality = 28(H)

Dexterity = 38(H)

Luck = 20(H)

Charm = 70(H)

Physical Power = 52 - 76

Magical Power = 12 - 30

Health Points = 45/225

Mana = 100/100

Hit rate = 100

Movement speed = 102

Body coordination = 102

Critical rate = 10%

Critical Defense = 0

Unused points: 0

After that he store remain of the freaking rabbit and drops on his Inventory

[Freaking Rabbits Remain [D]]

*Can be disassemble to piece

*Freaking Rabbit meat

*Freaking Rabbit skin

*Freaking rabbit bones

*Freaking rabbit eyes

*Freaking rabbit claw

[Freaking Rabbits Blunt [F]]

Attack: 15

Defense: 3

Effect:

Low chance to stun opponents.

[System notice!]

-Do you want to open Item Loot box x1?

-Y/N?

"Of course I will open it."

[System notice!]

-Congratulations you got Regeneration Ring[Uncommon]

Regeneration Ring[Uncommon]

Effect:

Regenerates HP and MP by 1% every 30 seconds

"Wow! What a lucky day"

Luis is going to equip the ring but he suddenly stops.

He hears a scream from a freaking rabbit.

"GROWWWWWWL!"

Four freaking rabbits show in the woods not so near to him.

"I do not know if I'm lucky or not today"

The freaking rabbits screams and their eyes turns red running towards Luis.

Luis run as fast as he could in order to escape the freaking rabbits and he hides inside a hole in a rock where he could be safe.

"My luck is running out I think"

He's sight is fading due to the blood loss of hours hiding but also because of hunger that he's suffering.

As he's sight fades he hears some footsteps going near him.

*Tmp*Tmp*Tmp

Until he saw some blurry face.

"Wake up!"

----End of Chapter 2----

*Girl voice

"Wake up Luis!"

"I told you to wake up Luis!"

Luis opens his eyes and he was shocked on what he just saw

"Sa-sapphire, is that you?"

"Who else it's gonna be?"

Luis recognize that he was in his previews High school classroom.

"Hey Luis why are still sleepy it's already Lunch break wake up already!"

"YAAAAAWN"

*Gently wipes the drool in his face

"Okay wait for me"

Sapphire is my high school friend, she was beautiful in every simple way, she smiles like heaven in disguise, her hair is long and it suit her so well, and her eyes are brown so pure and clear as it can be. She is my ideal girl she was jolly, kind and very understanding person I've ever known and she's the one of the hottest girl in our campus.

*Tmp*Tmp*Tmp

"Hey Luis walk faster!"

"Are you that hungry that I need to hurry?"

*half meant joke.

"Are you saying that I'm a glutton?"

*Sapphire's stomach growl as loud as it could.

"GROWL!"

"Your pet inside your stomach is already starving please feed it already!"

*Sapphire gently hit Luis chest many times as she could.

"Stop Sapphire it's tickling me"

"YAAAA"

*Sapphire stops

Suddenly a young boy shows up, he was taller than me. His skin is white and his haircut is bullet. He is more handsome and cooler than me.

"Yo Luis how are you bro"

"Yo Miggy long time no see"

Miggy is my Middle School best friend but he suddenly change when he went to High school, he always get in trouble with other school gangs and groups.

*Miggy puts his left arm to Luis shoulder and he whispers.

"Who is that chick with you? Is that your girlfriend?"

"She's not my girlfriend, she's like a big sister for me her name is Sapphire"

*Miggy smiles at Luis.

"Hey Luis lets go already"

"Sorry Miggy we need to go, see you"

"Okay have fun"

Luis and Sapphire run to the rooftop to eat.

*Tmp*Tmp*Tmp

"Have fun Luis! Have fun 'till you could"

*Miggy slowly licks his own lips and glare to them.

Meanwhile, Luis and Sapphire arrives in the rooftop to eat their lunch.

*Chomp*Chomp*Chomp

"Are you starving to death? It seems like you did not eat for 100 Years Luis"

*Just an expression for a glutton.

"No! It's just the food you prepare is too good"

"Stop lying glutton Luis"

Suddenly, a boy approach Sapphire.

"So Sapphire is that your new suitor?"

"Huh? Who are you and how did you know my name?"

"Who would not know such a fine beauty and sexy as you in this campus?"

"Stop your non-sense talking who are you?"

"I forgot to introduce myself, my name is Andrei Walls"

"Oh! He's not my boyfriend he's just a friend of mine"

"Sapphire lets go for a date later, my treat?"

"Nah i have things to do after school"

"Oh that's what I'm thinking. I will do something after school so how about tomorrow?"

"Sorry but i really do not want to go with you for a date"

"Let's go Luis, I do not want to be here"

Luis and Sapphire walk away from Andrei to go back to their classrooms.

-A few Hours later.

Girls are gossiping about the news that Andrei ask Sapphire for a date.

A random girl from our class ask Sapphire.

"Sapphire you did not know that Andrei is the only son of the Walls group of company in this country?"

"What he's extremely rich person?"

A random girl replied.

"Yes! In fact he owns many establishment and business in our country"

"Oh! Maybe i should think about it"

Sapphire continue to talk about Andrei and Luis was shock and hurt from words that came out from Sapphires mouth.

-After the class ends

"Hey Luis lets go home already"

Suddenly Miggy appeared in our classroom.

"Hey Luis lets go"

Luis was shock by what Miggy said but he was glad that Miggy said that because he was still hurt from the words that Sapphire said.

"Oh! Miggy wait"

"Sorry Sapphire, Miggy and I will go to somewhere else"

"How sad I would like tag along with me to introduce you to my suitor in order to know if he's worthy to be with me"

Luis is even more hurt to the words that Sapphire said.

Luis tried everything to smile and he smile to Sapphire and said

"Maybe next time Sapphire i will go with you and investigate him"

Luis sarcastically laugh

"Hahahaha"

"Okay Luis and Miggy see you tomorrow"

Miggy speak

"You too good luck to your date"

Luis never look back or even speak a word to Sapphire after that. Luis and Miggy walk towards the back of the school abandoned building and suddenly Miggy punch Luis face. Luis was shock and could not stand up from the ground. Miggy punches Luis violently and said.

"You think she will give happiness? You should asked me if she's trustworthy or not! You should ask me bro I'm your best friend"

Luis was confused of what Miggy's talking about.

"Luis you do not know what trouble you are in right now that girl is a wicked one"

"What are you saying Miggy?"

"That girl with you was known as the collector. She collects boys like you as a playmate and when she gets sick of you she will dispose you like a garbage in the street or worst"

"She's not that kind of girl you're talking about Miggy"

"No! You shut up Luis she will kill you in few days. Do you remember why I always got in trouble?"

"Yes I remember all of it"

"I got in trouble because of that girl got sick of me and now she wants me to be dead. She follows me to this School in order to monitor me"

A sound of footsteps were coming towards them.

*Tmp*Tmp*Tmp

"It's not safe here Luis come with me"

Luis and Miggy hide from the guys whose searching for them and in that group of guys Luis was shocked from what he saw. He saw Sapphire been kidnapped by Andrei and his men.

"Sapphire is in trouble" Luis said.

"Do not be fooled by them Luis they knew that we were here"

Andrei point a knife on Sapphires' neck and Sapphire shout "Help me Luis help!"

The guys shove her to the ground and starts to rips Sapphires Clothes.

Miggy said. "Do not be fooled by them Luis it's only an act to capture you" Luis shows up and without further thinking he pick up a metal pipe near him and run towards Andrei to save Sapphire.

"F*ck off All of you do not go near Sapphire" Andrei Smirk and let Luis go near to Sapphire.

Luis asked Sapphire are you alright? Sapphire replied "Yes! Luis I'm alright" as Sapphire smirk and hit Luis with a branch of wood near him. Luis head was bleeding and he is badly hurt. The guys started to tie Luis with a rope and Sapphire puts her sock inside Luis mouth. "Oh dear oh dear Luis you were charming, lovely and innocent as it can be you're my true hero. Meanwhile Miggy called some back up and they starts to fight each other even they were overcome by large crowd of men Andrei has and in the end all of Miggys' men were captured and Tortured by them. Luis saw how his best friend Miggy was tortured by those men, Miggy was hit by a metal pipe in his head and beat him till he run out of breathe. Andrei Stab Miggys hands with his knife and burns its tongue with a cigarette while Sapphire looks enjoys and glad of what she sees. Sapphire starts to order his men to rip his clothes and video tape it while she slowly spread her legs and one by one the men starts raping her and she seems enjoying it. Luis was devastated from what he saw. He blame himself from what happened to Miggy and his group and he felt nothing but agony and hatred. He cried and cried because he feels he was useless while Sapphires enjoys Luis Misery.

Few Hours later he Andrei and Sapphires group leaves the area like nothing happened and Luis search for help. After a few minutes Miggy and his group were brought to the nearest hospital.

Luis stays to the hospital and wait for Miggys' Doctors findings in the Emergency room. After an hour the doctor went out of the room and spoke to Luis.

"Are you his friend?"

"Yes I'm Luis how was Miggy?"

"I'm Doctor Ching and your friend condition is safe for now but due to hard impact of a blunt object that was hit to his head his cranium or skull was fractured and due to that your friend is in a state of deep unconsciousness that lasts for a prolonged or indefinite period called 'Coma' "

"When does he going to wake up?"

"We do not know the the exact date or time if he's lucky he will wake up in few days or months but in some cases they wake up after a year or more but commonly the do not wake up and their body began to give up and that's the cause of a person under coma to die"

Luis is more devastated after he hears what Doctor Ching said and Suddenly phone rings and a Familiar voice was heard in that moment.

"Sapphire Luis go home I have a Surprise for you!"

Luis felt nothing but hatred and he ride a taxi to go home as fast as he could. After 46 minutes he arrived at their house. He picks up the garden knife in their yard and slowly opens the door but he went inside the house without any problem. He slowly go to the room but no one is inside the house till he hears a noise upstairs, He picks up the gun inside the drawer of the entertainment room and he rushed to his step sisters room upstairs and he was shocked of what he just saw. Sapphires and Andrei men were raping her step sister Lexi and without further thinking Luis shot them 1 by 1 using his M1911 pistol 7 of them were killed in an instant and after that he violently stab anyone using the garden knife. "F*ck you all! all of you are going to hell" Sapphire and Andrei was scared and they pissed their pants Luis grab Andrei whose ***** and Luis cuts Andrei's man part. Andrei Scream in Pain "Uwaaaaaaaaak!" Luis Continue and he punches and kick Andrei till he cannot move an inch then He asked Sapphire "Why did you do this sapphire? Why!" Sapphire smirk and replied with a crazy tone "Because it was fun watching you suffer" Luis is pissed off and punch Sapphire and he tied her with a rope then check his step sister condition. Luckily she was fine but she was scared and traumatized of what did just happen. After that police arrived their house and Luis and the other were captured while her step sister was brought to the hospital. Lexi was innocent, loving, caring and sweet sister that she ever known her eyes are short and its colour is pure black. Her skin were white as snow and her height is 5'1, her hair is an Asymmetrical bob cut and its color (blonde). After that Luis was imprisoned for what happened and no one ever went to visit him for the past years after 2 years he was proven not guilty to kill anyone. He was released and he went straight home after that he was devastated to the news he heard that his step sister commit suicide by jumping to a building last week but it was not successful and due to the injury she was been comatose. Luis go to the hospital and starts to cry after he saw his step sister condition. After that he saw a familiar face smirking at him and he went mad "I will kill you! Sapphire". After that he woke up with tear over his face and he felt warm and he realized unfamiliar faces.

"Who are you?"

----End of Chapter 3----