! System Error !
Ch.1
a teen guy woke up in an empty room, he doesn't seem to remember what happened. It seems like he forgot everything (?)
Eiden
Ughh...*struggling* where am i?
Mura
Eiden, it seems like you're awake now.
Mura
it doesn't matter who i am. You'll know soon enough. *vanish*
Eiden
(what the...how did he just vanish like that..?)
System Helper
!!!
Welcome To The System
In Order To Go Back To Your Normal Life You Must Complete All The Task The System Gave You
Eiden
w,what?? What kind of joke is this?
System Helper
Do not be afraid, it may seems you have forgotten but do not worry. You and the System holder Made a deal, you were in a car accident that made you lost your life and the System holder give you a deal by letting you life again if you completed all the task the System gave you.
Eiden
IS THIS SOME KIND OF STUPID JOKE?? LIKE HUH?? AND WHO'S THAT GUY EARLIER??
System Helper
Please behave yourself. :)
And this is not a joke i understand you will react like this. That guy earlier is "Mura" he's the same as you. But for now, would you like me to tell you how to do the task?
System Helper
Thank you! I'm the System Helper, Or you could call me "Raku" From now on i'll be helping you do the task. I'll explain how the System works, Every task can be completed by participating in the story line, to put it simple you will be the character of a novel. In each novel they are some subtask that you can do, for every task/subtask that you completed you will be rewarded by a PT point which you can exchange for an item that you can use for the next novel or in other any situation.
Eiden
So I'm going to be in like a novel?
System Helper
Yes, that's correct.
Eiden
...okay, but what role will i play?
System Helper
Woah! What a nice question, you will play as the male lead. And sadly...Mura will play the Villain part.
Eiden
So that mean we're against each other?
System Helper
Hmm...I don't really know…maybe you could say it like that.
System Helper
Oh, right! I forgot to tell you, if you by any chance violate/changing the story line you will be punished. That's it for now, are you ready to start your first task?
Eiden
....there's no other option, isn't it?
! 1st Task !
"I'll become stronger for you"
The story is about who always been treated horrible by his family, especially his brother. Then one day when he was in high school she met a girl who turn his life upside down that before, and he made a promise to become stronger, and after that he live happily with the Heroine.
System Helper
Of course it will be romance, what else could it be?
System Helper
Now then i shall send you to the story!
Ch.2 (Task 1, Day 1)
I'll Become Stronger For You
First Chapter
System Helper
Psst..! Host, Wake up!
Eiden
Ugh... My head hurts..*awake*
Story Short, Eiden got adopted by Mura parents and ever since then Mura keep torturing Eiden.
Eiden
*check his head* Oh sh!t…! I'm bleeding!
System Helper
Host… Don't panic it's the part of the story you won't die that easily.
Eiden
(right I'm in a novel right now.)
System Helper
*sigh*…this is your first day here
System Helper
Here all the subtask you can do while you're here
• Meets Mura for the first time (300pt)
• Decline Mura order 1x
(600pt)
• Get the day 1 secret scene
(3,000pt)
System Helper
There's a secret scene for each day (which can turn this story upside down...but it's okay it's called plan B ^^ )
System Helper
Now then Host, i shall leave you alone for now. Good luck with the task! *Vanished*
Eiden
Ughh...*dizzy* ...*sigh* let's stop the bleeding for now.
With that Eiden start to find something, he found a bandage, and then he covered up the wounds.
Eiden
This will do for now..
Eiden
Now then… Let's find Mura(?)
Eiden
(why do i get here in the first place tho…I didn't even remember anything.)
Eiden
...*taking a small walk* Mura..Mura...*mumble*
Mura
....? What do you want shithead?
Eiden
...! *stop and turn around* Mura...
Meets Mura for the first time
(Completed)
Mura
Huh? You're brave enough now to call me by my name? *slap him*
Eiden
ACK...!! (What the...)
Eiden
I, im sorry… Brother...
Mura
.... Ugh, I had enough of you. Why did my parents choose you in the first place? You know you're just a useless shit right?
Mura
ANSWER WHEN I ASK YOU.
Eiden
Y, yes Brother!… (ugh..man)
Eiden
I'm just a useless person… Please forgive me brother…
Mura
*grin* you know what? Maybe you could do something to reduce my anger.
Mura
*look at his body* ...why don't you satisfy me for a little? That won't be a problem right? Dear little brother.
Mura
*grab his hand* now then shall we began?
Eiden
*Pull his hand away* No!
Eiden
What you're thinking you're doing?!
Decline Mura order 1x
(Completed)
Mura
...! You really dare to talk back now?! *pull him towards him*
Eiden
Ugh! *bump into him* (shit.. he's strong!)
Mura
Hear closely..i do not want to hear your opinion, you Must do whatever i say. From now on, I'll train you more often so that you obey me.
After that Mura brings Eiden to his room, already knowing what Will happen Eiden try to release him self from Mura, but Mura doesn't seem to release him at this time.
Mura
Heh, you like that shit head? *grin*
Eiden
*tied up* Stop.. please..*pant*
Mura
It wouldn't be this hard if you listen to me in the first place. *stomp on his head*
Eiden
I'm sorry brother! I'll do anything as you say, please let me go! *twitch*
Mura
That's what i want to hear. Now then lets start shall we? *grin* (this will trigger the System, i hope..)
Get the day 1 secret scene
(Completed)
Mura
*kiss him on the forehead* .... please remember me..*mumble*
Ch.3 (Task 1, Day 2)
Eiden
Mmn...*awake* where am i?..
System Helper
Good morning host, judging by your condition I'm sure you already unlock the day 1 secret scene.
Eiden
Ughh… Raku when Will i go to high school?
Eiden
I just need to meet the Heroine and life happily after right?
System Helper
That's right host, you just need to complete Day 3 and the time skip will bring you to the day you're in high school.
Eiden
What's the task for today?
System Helper
Day 2 Sub Task
• Have a conversation with Mura for more than 3 minutes
(200pt)
• Unlock Day 2 Secret scene
(3,000pt)
System Helper
Oh,, yeah host your current Pt point are 3,900 would you like to see the exchange shop?
System Helper
Understood, then i shall leave now.
System Helper
Oh! I forgot to tell you this, but in case you want to see the secret scene again you can check it by saying "memories scene" the tab will appear.
Eiden
*lightly blush* the hell? I'm not gonna do it, never!
System Helper
That's it for now host, i'll take my leave now. *Vanished*
Eiden
Man…I want to Vanished like that too.*got up & put some clothes on* (come to think of it… Mura can Vanish like that too does that mean he's a System as well? But Raku said he's the same as me…then why can't i vanish or teleport?…)
Eiden
Well i guess I'm gonna take a walk again...
Eiden
Ugh…! Ah, damn…my back hurts
Eiden
*laying down again* come to think of it, doesn't it suppose to be a romance novel? Then what's wrong with the secret scene? The male lead and the villain doing "that" ? Ridiculous...
With that Eiden take a nap and find himself awake in the evening
Mura
How much longer will you sleep on my bed? *groaning*
Eiden
I'll leave immediately
Mura
Stop. *sigh* eat this, mom made you a porridge. I can't believe mom told me to bring these to you, where are the Maids? Dead or something? *handing him the porridge*
Eiden
Thanks…but I'm not hungry *put the porridge down*
Eiden
Look, I'm sorry but I'm really not hungry at the moment.
Mura
*take a spoon of porridge* If you didn't eat this, i'll make you have a night without sleep. *grin*
Eiden
(ugh…I hate porridge.)
Mura
*watching him eating* ....
Eiden
*notices* umm...do you want some?..
Mura
Heh! I can buy better food than that porridge, don't take me so low. I can even buy you a whole porridge restaurant if i want to
Eiden
So..do you want some?..*offering to feed him*
Mura
*slap his hand* Enough, who do you think you are? Finish your food and go back to your room. I can't stand you in my room more than today.
Have a conversation with Mura
for more than 3 minutes
(Completed)
Eiden
(yes..!! the first sub task completed now i just need to find the secret scene)
Eiden couldnt finish his food because he's full so he just go
back to his room
Eiden
Hmm...come to think of it, yesterday after the secret scene..
Eiden
Does he clean my body after that? Well I'm ***** when I woke up, but I don't feel dirty..
Eiden
At least he's not a big jerk(?)
Eiden
What are you doing here??!
It takes a while for the other person to respond, then suddenly the other person pushed him on to the bed
Eiden
Ugh!.. What do you want?
Mura
*gets on top of him* didn't I say i won't let you sleep tonight?
Eiden
Huh? Why? I eat my food!
Mura
But you didn't finish it. *kiss him*
Eiden
Mnhnmp!!....*tries to resist*
Eiden tries to fight back, but the gap between their power are something, with that Eiden gave up and let Mura do what he wants to him
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