The Last Commitment
Ep. 1: Sudden Confession
It was 7th of June, 2019
12:30 pm
Kaylin Rivera
oh I am sorry Erick. I was busy with doing homework so I couldn't reply. *replied after 2 hrs of the message send by Erick
Erick Smith
*Got notification
Erick Smith
*typing. It's ok. You don't have to be sorry. I understand.
Erick Smith
BTW if you are free now then can I get my answer please.
Kaylin Rivera
*reading the question.
oh it's simple you just have to subtract 17 by 16 for first digit, then divide 20 by 5 for the next and then finally add 1 to 2.
That's very simple.
Erick Smith
So, what are the final answers?
Kaylin Rivera
umm.. it's 1 4 and 3.
Kaylin Rivera
this is the sequence.
Erick Smith
*blushes.
I too do
Kaylin is unaware that the numbers meant 'I Love you'
Kaylin Rivera
Oh hello!!!
say up clearly.
Erick Smith
can I call you. right now?
Kaylin Rivera
you are acting weird today.
Kaylin Rivera
*Gave a second thought.
ok
Kaylin Rivera
Hello! Erick say what's up to you today?
Erick Smith
Kaylin. Can I ask you a different question?
Kaylin Rivera
*in her mind (He is acting really weird).
ok. Ask it?
Erick Smith
*hesitating. Suppose If someday a guy asks you to date him, will you accept him?
Kaylin Rivera
what kind of question is that? out of syllabus. *fakes a laugh
Erick Smith
Please!! Just answer it.
Kaylin Rivera
Ok. If I had to be in this situation then It would depend upon the guy asking. *kinda made some sense
Erick Smith
And if the guy is type of funny. Will you accept him?
Kaylin Rivera
Erick just get to the point what you are trying to say. *got annoyed
Erick Smith
ok. Kaylin. Will you be my girlfriend? *in one breathe
Kaylin Rivera
*shocked. What.
Kaylin Rivera
Listen Erick are you out of your mind.
Character : FL
Name - Kaylin Rivera:
Height -156 cm
School - Modern Global School.
DOB - 12.12.2004
Hobby - Dancing
Sports - Badminton
Tags - River, linlin and avie.
Character : 2nd ML
Name - Erick Smith
Height - 189 cm
School - Modern Global School
DOB - 06.3.2004
Hobby - Painting
Sports - Basketball
Tags - Mister Masterpiece, Potato.
Kaylin and Erick were classmates from 6th standard onwards but there friendship started from 7th standard.
On the end of 8th standard they became bestfriends.
Kaylin Rivera
hey listen. we are better being bestfriend.
Kaylin Rivera
Please, understand. I don't want to be your girlfriend. It's out of blue
Kaylin Rivera
I never thought you more than bestfriend.
Erick Smith
Kaylin.
but I don't want to be your bestfriend
Erick Smith
I want you as my girlfriend.
Erick Smith
Kaylin, I liked You for a long time and today I gain courage to confess to you.
Erick Smith
Can you consider me as your boyfriend?
Erick Smith
ok. You don't have to answer right away.
Erick Smith
Take your time and give it some thought.
Kaylin Rivera
*unable to speak
Erick Smith
hey linlin, I know I sound like potato.
Kaylin Rivera
cause you are a potato *blabbering
Kaylin Rivera
*Suddenly remembering the situation
Kaylin Rivera
ok. give me some time.
Erick Smith
Tomorrow. I hope you with an answer.
Kaylin Rivera
what? It too rushing
Erick Smith
then how much time do you need?
Kaylin Rivera
4 years. after we complete our school life.
Erick Smith
huh...*dumbfounded.
4 yrs.
Kaylin Rivera
why can't you wait that much.
Kaylin Rivera
are you that impatient.
Kaylin Rivera
or you are not confident on me.
Erick Smith
no that's not the case.
Kaylin Rivera
it's just what?
Erick Smith
Kaylin. I ain't joking.
my feelings towards you are not going to be less.
Erick Smith
I will love you tomorrow more than today.
Kaylin Rivera
*unbelievable.
Erick Smith
So please try to understand.
And tomorrow be ready with your answer.
Kaylin Rivera
*couldn't speak a word
grudge never dies
Erick Smith
*Entering School Gate
Erick Smith
*notices kaylin
Erick Smith
Hey, Avie Have you got an answer?
Kaylin Rivera
you Potato headed person. *cursing
Kaylin drags Erick to school Store room.
Kaylin Rivera
Hey Listen carefully
Kaylin Rivera
I am.... *chocked
Erick Smith
Take it easy. I am all ear.
Kaylin Rivera
I am afraid to loose you.
Erick Smith
stupid! how will you loose me if we upgrade our relationship.
Kaylin Rivera
No. Not, that not I am saying. I am afraid that if anyday we breakup. Then we won't even be friends anymore.
Erick Smith
oh dear, why would we breakup.
Erick Smith
In any case I won't breakup with you.
Erick Smith
now stop crying
Erick Smith
your eyes are fluffy.
Kaylin Rivera
Don't look at me *gets fingers to cover her eyes.
Kaylin Rivera
what are you at?
Erick Smith
So, are you accepting to be my girlfriend?
Erick Smith
I am unable to listen. What is your answer.
Kaylin Rivera
Huh!?? I won't repeat.
Erick Smith
just one more time. *insisting
Kaylin Rivera
Fine. I am accepting to be your girlfriend.
Kaylin Rivera
Are you done now?
Kaylin Rivera
*Moves towards the door.
Erick Smith
Hey, don't be mad. It's our first day.
Kaylin Rivera
*returns to him
Kaylin Rivera
*gets close to his ears
Kaylin Rivera
one commitment you have to make that you will keep our relationship a secret.
Erick Smith
umm...ok . no problem.
Kaylin Rivera
not even your close buddy. Got it?
Kaylin Rivera
now, why are you disappointed?
Erick Smith
No. I thought we will be having our first kiss.
Kaylin Rivera
come near me?
Erick Smith
*bends down to reach Kaylin's face
Kaylin Rivera
*caught he chin with three fingers and shoved off saying - keep your dirty thoughts out of this universe.
Kaylin Rivera
*he is kinda cute
after there leave a shadow appears
Anonymous
You both are too stupid
Anonymous
How can they be happy
Anonymous
after ruining my entire life
Anonymous
Let's wait and watch. If you can survive this secret-secret game.
Anonymous
Get ready for your pay. KAYLIN RIVERA.
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