Hi I’m Liza you guy can call me Windy Red that my nickname and my favorite color. This is my first time writing in different language novel. I usually write my own language novel more, My English isn’t that good so please help me on it.
Is there any problem with my grammar you can just complain, it alright I can take it.
So now let me explain how sign work in my novel
[ ] this is a sign that show place and sound
\~\~ this show when characters speak in there mind
** this show action of each character’s
*this show when they speak
- - this when you see crowds whisper something like that
<> this show when there something on the whiteboard or paper or book something like that
That all for my novel introduction enjoy your read big love.
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[ GRAND GOLDEN ROYAL GRADEN UNIVERSITY FRONT GATE ]
**Car stop in front of the most popular school in China and a girl step out of the car**
-Whisper-
Who’s that girl?. Is she new here. Wow she beautiful. Yeah she might be a new student I never saw her here before.
*sigh* Uh I hate first day of school, I hate making new friends, I hate new class design, I hate new teacher. I mean I hate everything about new school. Uh why mom have to forces me to change school. I don’t understand it…it not like we moving to another city or something why do I have to change school all the time!, never mind let just start this first school year it might be the worst school year ever. **Yu Yan bragging about changing school in front of the school gate while everyone looking at her**
[ THE INTRODUCTION THAT ISN’T SHOW ON THE NOVEL ]
Hi I’m Yu Yan, I’m the first daughter of Yu family my parents are business man and business woman they often travel so I normally stay with my grandparents. And yet I have one younger brother and younger sister as well. This is my second year in university. I’m in business department. Nice to meet you.
[ END ]
[ PRINCIPAL OFFICE ]
Hi I’m Yu Yan the new student transferred from Shanghai university. Can I have my study information please **Yu Yan put on a litter sweet smile with warm sweet tone**
Oh so you the new student Yu Yan who just transfer. Right nice to meet you I’m principal Hei An, welcome to The Grand Golden Royal Gardens university oh yeah this is your study information have a great school years. \~if more student transfers to my school that will be a great deal, a little few more will make my school the greatest of all\~ **principle Hei An smile like a freak**
Oh thank you so much principle Hei, I may take my leave thank again principal Hei **Yu Yan walk out with an awkward smile** \~he seem weird, and does he knows that his name mean dark\~ any way let just find my class it might be around here__!
**Yu Yan look down to see her information paper**
...< R6C7 IS NOTED DOWN ON HER INFORMATION PAPER > ...
Ahh… why my class have to be that height it on row 6, why can’t mom put me on much lower row classes I hate stairway **Yu Yan look up to the school building with a bad mood**
[ MEAN WHILE…]
Young master wake up it time for school. You will be late if you still sleep wake up young master wake up!! **Bulter of Lee family break into his young master room without hesitation and freak out like a freak**
What a scream ?!! Shut up will you, come on let go I will be late for sure if you still freaking out like that. **Mr young master walk out from his dressing room straight to the car in front of the front gate of LEE Family**
Oh young master I thought you haven’t a wake yet, that why I freak out like that sorry **butler of LEE family follow his young master to the car in front of the building** young master don’t you tell Ms Lee that you’re going__
No need she a sleep it isn’t good for her health if I woke her up this early in the morning. And you! This year stay with them I want you to take care of them when I’m gone. Anyway what the number of my class this year? **Wen Yang get in the car and bulter Yue Lao followed **
So your class this year is R6C7 is it too high, I can change it for you if you want too? *say butler Yue Lao*
No need, it ok let it be. Besides row 6 got a great view as well I like it. *say Wen Yang*
[ THE INTRODUCTION THAT ISN’T SHOW ON THE NOVEL ]
Hi I’m Lee Wen Yang, the only son of Lee family. My dad is a business man and my mom is the owner of many shops around the world. This is butler Yue Lao my family personal assistant today is my first day of school, I’m in business department. Nice to meet you.
[ END ]
[ GRAND GOLDEN ROYAL GRADEN UNIVERSITY FRONT GATE ]
Young master your dorm will be with a wealthy young lady name Yu Yan is it ok or you need to change to another dorm. *say butler Yao*
It ok, butler Yue Lao don’t forget to advise my mother to drink that medicine everyday, it great for her health. *say wen Yang* **Wen Yang put on a cold face looking at butler Yue Lao**
Yes young master I will. ** butler Yue Lao smile awkwardly** \~it not like he moving out or something why does he have to give me so much reminders and why does it feel cold in here!!\~
Ok then see you next time **Lee Wen Yang walk out of the car enter the school gate**
[ SCHOOL GATE ]
-WHISPER-
Look who that?. Wow he so handsome. Is he the new student?. I bet he rich. What a handsome man.
*sigh* let go . **say butler Yue Lao to the car driver**
SORRY GUY THAT ALL FOR TODAY CHAPTER SEE YOU NEXT CHAPTER. OH YEAH EACH NAME OF THE CHARACTER IN THE MOVIE GOT THERE OWN MEANING FIND OUT WHAT IT MEAN AND COMMENTS DOWN BELOW. OKIE THEN BYEEEEEEEE
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[ THE DORMITORY ]
So this is my dorm huh? Wow it massive hahah my mom might spend a little bit more money on this let see who’s I stay with this years *say Yu Yan*
...< LEE WEN YANG ( M ) IS NOTED DOWN ON HER INFORMATION PAPER >...
Wait…what…what my roommate is a boy ahhhh…principal Hei An why can’t you just give me a normal female roommate like other ugh I hate it **Yu Yan walk into the dorm with annoying face**.
[ PRINCIPAL HAI AN OFFICE ]
Hashoooo… em…. **principal Hei An sneezed**
Principal Hei An are you all right. *say teacher Xin Xing*
I’m ok continue your speech. *answered principal Hei An* \~I wonder who speak behind my back\~
[ BACK TO THE DORMITORY ]
It ok, keep calm, it just a male roommate it not a big deal. Yu Yan don’t forget that you also have a male friend they the same as girl it not a big of a deal. **Yu Yan speak to herself while hanging up her clothes** But the thing is I don’t know that guy, what if he a prevent it will be a bad thing for me I’m…
[ DING DONG ]
Ugh who’s here at this time, I haven’t even finish preparing my clothes yet **Yu Yan walk to the door with an annoying face and open the dormitory door**
IT MIGHT BE YOUR FUTURE HUSBAND!! ** SAY THE AUTHOR**
SHUT UP!! **SAY YU YAN**
OKIE!! **SAY THE AUTHOR**. \~SHE RUDE\~
[ DOOR ]
**Yu Yan open the door gently but with an annoyed temper**
HI. *say Lee Wen Yang* \~it chilly here!!\~
Oh Hi you are…? *say Yu Yan* **Yu Yan making a fake friendly smile** \~he look kinda…ugly!!\~
Oh I’m your roommate Lee Wen Yang nice to meet you *say Wen Yang*. \~So this is MISS Yu Yan\~
Oh you’re my roommate, yes em my name is Yu Yan common in. **Yu Yan smile awkwardly welcome her roommate**. \~but em well he look find\~
...< FIRST ROOM LEE WEN YANG SECOND ROOM YU YAN >...
So it say in the paper that my room is the first one and your is the second one I should get in to my room. **Wen Yang turn around wanted to go to his room
Wait, the school information really say that? **say Yu Yan with a shocking face**
Yes, it does show which room is your and which room is mine is there a problem. **say Wen Yang with a questionable face**
Yes…yes there a problem, so apparently I didn’t see that in the information paper, now I already move my stuff to the first room **say Yu Yan moving her hand awkwardly**
Well it fine you just move your stuff to the second room and that it. *say Wen Yang*
No it not just that, em there a lot of stuff **YuYan speak awkwardly with her awkward hand move around while she talk**
It ok let me help you *say Wen Yang* **Wen Yang walk to the first room then open**
No don’t… *scream Yu Yan*
Puff…Wow what a mess in here **Wen Yang walk into Yu Yan dormitory while Yu Yan follow him** it just a few school year why do you have to bring this lot of stuff, wow there many book here **Wen Yang pick up one of Yu Yang book**. you even bring hot pot!? *say Wen Yang*
Well you never know when will you hungry, not only hot pot I also bring dry food and drink too there **Both look at the study table full of food** there a lot of stuff, I don’t want to change. You can stay in the second room will you well it not even that different from this room either **Yu Yan continue speaking with her cute face**
*sigh* ok then I let you stay in this room but can I borrow this book of your? **say Wen Yang while holding a book to him self**
Yes you can but please take care of it if anything happen to that book I’ll kill you without any trace **Yu Yan put a speculative face**
Ok…ok I will take care of it like my son then heheh…. **say Wen Yang with his joking voice**
Ok then now leave my room I have to clean this stuff up go quick shsh… **Yu Yan push Wen Yang out of her room and shut the room behind this back**
Hey… what class are you in? **shouted Wen Yang standing in front of Yu Yan room**
I’m in class 7 *answered Yu Yan* you?
Me too *say Wen yang*
Great, then tomorrow we can caught our class together right? *Yu Yan continue*
Yeah we can. *say Wen Yang*
\~This girl seem interesting\~
[ ON THÉ PHONE ]
Yue Lao go and find more information about this girl name Yu Yan. *say Wen Yang* **speaking with his butler with a cold voice and cold impression**
Yes young master **Butler Yue Lao agreed**
[ CALL END ]
It seem that our master have an interest in this new girl. I wonder who she is. *say bulter Yue Lao to the car driver*
Hahahah who’s know. *the car driver reply*
THAT ALL FOR TODAY CHAPTER THANK FOR YOUR READING BIG LOVE. AND THAT PICTURE I JUST FOUND IT ON PINTEREST ALL CREDIT HAVE TO GIVE TO THOSE PEOPLE WHO DRAW IT. AHHH I RUN OUT OF INFORMATION HELP ME ANYWAY BYEE SEE YOU TOMORROW.
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