The contrast between Kyne's nonchalant nature and Zyde's powerful mafia boss persona creates immediate intrigue. The unexpectedness of Zyde's feelings adds a compelling layer of conflict. Let's build on this foundation:
Expanding on the Characters:
- Kyne: While "nonchalant" is a good starting point, let's add more depth. What specifically makes him nonchalant? Is he naturally apathetic, or is it a mask he wears to hide vulnerability? What are his hobbies, dreams, and fears? Does he have any close friends or family? Giving him a rich inner life will make him more relatable and engaging. Consider adding quirks or details that make him unique.
- Zyde: Being a mafia boss's son adds a layer of complexity. What aspects of his upbringing shaped him into the person he is? Is he ruthless, or does he have a hidden softer side? How does his family react to his feelings for Kyne? What are the dangers and pressures he faces, both in his family life an
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